Thursday, February 4, 2010

Econoline, 195


Not so happy with this one, i slept on it and when I looked at it when I woke up... it still hadn't grown on me. It is interesting, but still is missing something. I will eventually figure it out... must be in the composition or the value planes. I am thinking the ground plane is too light at the moment... or I am just looking for something wrong with it :)

4 comments:

  1. I absolutely love your painting style! Hope you figure out what you think is missing... The reds and greens work together well. Maybe some red in the green or darker shadows? Cool stuff =D

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  2. thanks, man. i think i never finished the ground plane. sort of unresolved. i work from piece to piece instead of working all over at the same time with the exceptions of the darks... i am pretty sure i just went to sleep on the ground and need to resolve it! thanks for the input!

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  3. i think i agree,something really dark as martin said to make it pop....the white in the foreground i think is fighting with the van...isn't this fun,we all get to put in our two cents!

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  4. What about a log across the front of the wheels ... like the driver had to stop ... for the moment.

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